Your sense of pacing could not be better. The rest of Newgrounds could learn a thing or two from you talent for timing.
I never thought i would log on to specifically blam something. This isn't your first attempt at animation, so WTF? Practice a little self criticism and self-awareness, please.
And take the hate in stride. The internet is full of assholes.
I'm calling the Internet Police you big meanie.
April fools, right?... right?... when does someone come out and say April fools?...
Yeah. I agree. This needs to be extended into a loop.
Also. I want the music. Can you at least post a link to the music?
That was ballsy posting something so incredibly feminine and blatantly Christian on NG knowing full well you'll get the crap blammed out of you.
Kudos, and you made the front page on top of that.
Writing and voice acting: Get someone to critique/correct your work before you post. And i know you want to spread the Gospel story, but your audience is smarter and more observant than you give them credit for. You don't need to spell it out for them in your notes.
Keep it up.
cool, thanks! :)
Until the punch line. Made it all worth while.
I love the music
Especially "Half Baked Monkey" by Mo-tech.
That guy is the shizzle, fo-shizzle, yo.
Yay!! I was gonna pm you to let you know I used it, but wasn't sure if you were active anymore. Nice to see you are. Thanks for making such a great tune!!! :D
Your insight on the intricacies of the human condition and your ability to accurately caricature them is impressive and somewhat disturbing.
And the moral of the story is...
I did not find it heart warming or uplifting at all.
She left because she thought something better came along.
The bitch was frivolous and wrong.
Oh? She thought of you the whole time? She realized she was wrong?
TOO LATE BITCH!
Let her correct her mistakes with the next chump.
What she did was the equivalent of cheating.
... the music is cute.
I would think putting a giant lightbulb up by the north pole would contribute to the melting of the polar ice cap... jerk.
who needs a polar ice cap
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